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外国学生的优秀作文,中国学生该如何写?

高中英语作文应该怎么写?平时看到很多学生一写到高中英语作文就开始抓耳挠腮,不知道应该怎么写?只要用一些常用的作文模板、好词好句就能拿高分吗?高考已经结束了,历年高考英语作文都是被关注的焦点,不乏各省份有很多高考优秀作文, 但存在更多的是见解不深、观点不明、结构不清的高中英语作文,而许多高中英语老师更是抛出一些所谓的万能句子让学生套用,这样的高中英语作文写出来真得好吗?
 

小编今天分享一篇外国学生的优秀作文,望大家多多参考学习!

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一、国外高中生优秀英语作文

 

偶然在网上看到一篇国外高中生的英语作文,是位华裔,2017年被耶鲁大学录取,爱好文学、历史、国际关系和文化交流,曾经在校担任模拟联合国社长及文艺杂志文学版主编,并获得过国际学生英语奖。 看到她的作文,不由得震惊其思维深度。以小见大,通过发生在自己身上的一件小事,拓展到文化、世界观,加上自己的思考,有独特的角度,是一篇非常成功的英语议论文。下面给大家展示一下这篇高中英语作文:

One night during tea we somehow started a conversation about favorite childhood TV shows. Just as it was always the case in conversations like this, I sat quietly in the corner of the room and listened, trying hard to understand what’s going on but did not have a clue. Perhaps because I was quieter than usual that night, Gemma noticed my awkward silence, and made the group to pay its attention.......It is not because that I don’t want to speak—it is just that Chinese culture is very different from American culture.”(这三段叙述的是个人故事,朋友闲聊谈起儿童电视节目的话题,因中外文化大环境不同,个人观点很难被理解,所以本文作者在这个话题上欲言又止。) What exactly is my culture? I asked myself.(以小见大,引申到文化问题上,同时也是过渡句。)The first answer that came to my mind was a picture of the Great Wall. Then I thought about the Tiananmen Square—the Chinese equivalent of the National Mall —and the Chinese National Flag. All of these are symbols that visually represent Chinese culture, but here’s the thing: They are relevant to me, but they are not so to someone who is unfamiliar with China. In order to engage my audience, I need something more tangible and interesting, something that could create empathy regardless of cultural differences. That object, as I came to realize much later, is, in fact, my life.(中国标志性事物不能反映中国文化,因为国外人不熟知。) Through the lens of my life,.....Of course, these are biased answers. However, coming from my own perspective, they are more effective to reflect something quite interesting but often subtle about China and its culture, because even though my story is only one out of 1.4 billion, it has been shaped and modeled and polished just like that of other Chinese people by the same language, the same history, the same political system, the same education and the same traditions. Culture is not a noun. Culture is a verb. It is how a specific group of people talk, think and see the world.(回忆在中国的家乡生活,家乡生活反映出中国特有的文化、人群特点、思考方式。) However, why can’t we see cultures in another way? Instead of having only one worldview, we now have many different ones because of cultural exchange....Instead of letting cultures clash, we should have them talk to each other—and we are the ones who can make such communication happen.Every single one of us on this planet has a piece of puzzle inscribed with our stories. If all of the pieces are collected and put together, we will have the picture of universal peace, love and understanding. We are all interconnected. Our threads of fates are interwoven.I am ready to contribute my piece for peace. Are you?(倡导多元化交流,减少冲突;希望世界和平,共筑友好世界。)

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二、老师喜欢看什么样的英语作文

 

任何阅卷老师都喜欢看有新颖、有内容的文章。上面这篇议论文,不仅是国外的老师,国内的老师看到这种文章也会特别喜欢, 从千篇一律的万能句子英语作文中抽离,突然看到一篇既有独特性、又包含主流价值观的文章,而且如果作文的语言、造词也没毛病,高考优秀英语作文稳稳的!

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三、那优秀的高中英语作文怎么写呢?

 

1.如果你想达到这篇高中英语作文的水平,不仅需要深厚的语言功底,还需要有一定的文化底蕴,才能有思维的深度。所以在平时的英语学习过程中,建议多阅读英语原版书籍,增加英语词汇量积累。这是唯一的途径!

2.网上有许多高中英语作文范文、高中英语作文模版、高中英语绝佳使用句子等等,这些资料可能会有好的句子、词汇你能用到,但更多的是反复被抄来抄去的重复文章,所以在获取这些资源时,需要辨别出哪些是优质的英语作文资源。

我们考试英语写作的要求不是很高,写一篇两百字的短文即可。那么我们要怎样利用这短短的两百个字来吸引老师的目光呢?还是要多多训练写作能力不断提高高中英语作文水平!

 

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